2026-03-15

Fixing Earendel

Currently Earendel notes are a real mess, and are in dire need of a rewrite. I guess I will take one note from Earendel and move it to "New Earendel", rewriting it in the process to be something I can be proud of. One problem I am having at the moment is that my keyboard has decided to randomly miss keystrokes, or repeat them. I'm not sure if it is a problem with the hardware or the software (Pop-OS)

I think that I'm going to start with Earendel/04-Countries-and-Polities/Helheim as it is central to the founding story. It currently reads as follows:

Helheim

Helheim, the origin country of the humans of Earandel, was a fascist monarchy, ruled by the Kaiser.

Helheim was technology advanced, but had no concept of magic until Dr. Doctorname discovered “the great weave” that he thought he could harness for energy production.  His experiments, partnering with the military, invented “The Gate”.  The gate generates a rift in space and time to Earandel.  “The Gate” allowed instantaneous transport between the two realms, but it consumed so much power that the entire city of Helheim would experience total blackout while the gate was opened.

Helheim was surrounded by several competing empires, and was frequently at war with one of them.  Towards the end of the gate era, most of the surrounding nations united against Helheim and destroyed the kingdom.  They split the territories between them, and destroyed the remnants of the imperial city.  The DoctorName Gate was lost, as well as the Knowledge of how to rebuild it.

There was an expedition led by the crown prince to Earendel, to scout for supplies and potential colonization.  They went through the gate four days  after the start of the last war. The expedition was a failure, with 70 of the 77 members of the expedition being lost, as well as being delayed from returning to Helheim by over a year.  Once they returned, they found the empire on the brink of collapse, and so evacuated the royal family and as many soldiers and civilians as possible to Earandel.

30,000 civilians

10,000 soldiers

Human Empire
Earendel

It's not much, but it is a start. But for the purposes of my expansion tonight, I want to focus on the government structure. Helheim is based on the German Empire at the start of WW1. I want the makeup of this government to be based on that, but greatly simplified.

Source Information

From the 1914-1918 Encyclopedia:

The political system under the 1871 constitution of Imperial Germany can be described on one hand as a federation of formerly sovereign principalities and free city states, with the king of Prussia presiding over the federation and assuming the hereditary title as German emperor (Kaiser). On the other hand, it was a constitutional monarchy with strict separation of powers. The executive branch of government had a triangular shape, headed by the Kaiser. The civilian part of the executive was led by the imperial chancellor. The chancellor was not elected but instead appointed by the Kaiser and responsible only to him. The military part of the executive was led by the high command of the army’s General Staff and by the Imperial Admiralty; the chancellor had no authority over their strategic planning and decisions. Coordination between the civilian and military branch of government fell under the _Kaiser’_s responsibility.

The legislative branch of government consisted of two chambers, the Bundesrat, representing the states, and the Reichstag, representing the people. Without the consent of a majority in both chambers no law, including the budget, could be passed. The 397 members of the Reichstag were democratically elected – beginning in 1888 for a five-year term – by universal male suffrage. Although the Reichstag’s majority was indispensable in passing legislation, it neither elected the chancellor nor could it depose him by a vote of no confidence; it was a purely legislative body.1

From Wikipedia:

The Bundesrat (German for 'Federal Council') was the highest legislative body in the German Empire (1871–1918). Its members were appointed by the governments of Germany's constituent states to represent their interests in the German parliament. The popularly elected Reichstag was the lower house. The Constitution of the German Empire required that both the Bundesrat and the Reichstag approve laws before they came into force. The Bundesrat was responsible for the enactment of the laws, administrative regulations and the judicial resolution of disputes between constituent states. Its approval was required for declarations of war and, with certain limitations, the conclusion of state treaties.

The chairman of the Bundesrat was the chancellor, who was appointed by the emperor. Constitutionally, his only functions were to chair the Bundesrat's meetings and implement its resolutions. He had neither a seat nor a vote in the chamber and could not propose legislation. In practice, however, the chancellor was almost always the minister president of Prussia as well. As Prussian minister president, the chancellor could act as a member of the Bundesrat and introduce legislation.

The predecessor of the German Empire, the North German Confederation (1867–1870), had a Bundesrat that was carried over to the newly united Germany with little change. Emperor Wilhelm I (r. 1871–1888) wished to rename the Bundesrat to the "Reichsrat", but his chancellor, Otto von Bismarck, convinced him that the federal character of the Empire should continue to be emphasized. The name therefore remained "Bundesrat".[1]

Here is what the new note looks like:
Helheim

Government of Helheim

The Executive Branch

The Executive branch of Helheim is led by the Emperor, who appoints a Chancellor to handle civilian matters, and the High Commander of the Imperial Army and the high Admiral of the Imperial Navy for military matters.

The Emperor

  • Appoints and dismisses the Imperial Chancellor
  • Commands the Imperial Army and Navy
  • Can issue emergency orders
    • These require later legislative approval
  • Represents the Empire in foreign affairs and signs treaties
  • Has the authority to dissolve the People's Council with the consent of the Federal Council.

The Chancellor

  • Selected by the Emperor
  • Serves as head of government
  • Responsible for oversight of civilian offices
  • Responsible for introducing legislation (Federal Council)

High Commander of the Imperial Army

  • Selected by the Emperor
    • Must be selected of the Generals of the Army

High Admiral of the Imperial Navy

  • Selected by the Emperor
    • Must by selected of the Admirals of the Navy

The Legislative Branch

There are two legislative houses, the "Federal Council" and the "People's Council".

The Federal Council

The Federal Council was made up of 40 members appointed by the constituent states of Helheim, with Helheim itself holding the most (14) seats of any member in the body.

Helheim State Number of votes
Kingdom of Helheim 14
Kingdom of Baiern 5
Kingdom of Sax 5
Kingdom of Vurtemberg 5
Grand Duchy of Baden 3
Grand Duchy of Hesse 3
Principality of Lippe 1
Free City of Bremen 1
Free City of Treva 1
Free City of Loobeck 1
Imperial Chancellor 1
Total Members: 40

The People's Council

The people's council was made up of 400 members, elected via universal male suffrage. The people's house could only vote on legislation brought by the Federal Council. No law could pass without the majority of the People's Council.

Judicial Branch

Court of Justice

An appellate court, that handled disputes between member states. The Court of Justice was overseen by the High Councillor of Justice, and different cases would be held in different "Senates". Each Senate consisted of seven Councillors. Senates could be one of the following types:

  • Civil Senate - Civil appeals, such as contract disputes, property cases, commercial matters
  • Criminal Senate - Criminal appeals from lower courts
  • Special Senate - Dealing with matters of the constitution

Civilian Offices

  • Imperial Office of the Interior
    • Office of Agriculture
    • Customs Office
    • Elections Office
    • Immigrations Office
    • Welfare Office
  • Imperial Treasury
  • Imperial Postal and Telegraph Office
  • Imperial Office of Rail
  • Imperial Academy of Science
    • Office of the Occult

1: https://encyclopedia.1914-1918-online.net/article/governments-parliaments-and-parties-germany/#toc_introduction